Wednesday, August 12, 2009

The Patupaiarehe...

I was in a dark, gloomy room on a dark, gloomy night. It was very silent, quite and eerie, I was standing there all alone wearing a yellow phosphorescent top. I saw a pitch black shadow emerging towards me. I started to panic, I ran around in circles screaming for help!!! Then suddenly the door open... Dad came in with a torch.

1 comment:

  1. Good use of these words Christina. When practising the elements of story writing, don't worry about ending the "plot" practice the element, keep a record of good ideas and think of ways to incorporate them into a story in the future.

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